i like the sound design of the melody, it seems nice.the intro is good. in the first melodic part u could add an 808 or something to make it hit harder, but its still good.in the buildups and breakdowns, dang u tried to change the key lol. if u wanna make it not sound awful, u had to change it 7 or 12 semitones (12=1 octave), and then to check out because on B# (i have studied B as H, and B flat as B but whatevs) sometimes can sound a little bit of bad. also in the build u could make the tone slightly going up and then down, not like that. u can use the slide function about that. the drop is pretty good, but kinda comes from nowhere. in my opinion the basses dont fit much. yeh the second part is the same lmao. the ending is pretty cool as the intro. ofc hope u didnt use presets and loops and any shit like that. also now the mastering is better. so 7/10 :)
thats copy pasted from the soundcloud upload lol
yeh thats everything i gotta say :D